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Art 2
Charcoal
"Marilyn Monroe"
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**Be as positive as possible. Try to think about how you would feel if what you want to say was said of you. If it can possibly be taken badly, even if that is not your intent- rethink it!
**Be specific and constructive. Do not just say “It is cool.” or “ I like it.” Say what is good about it specifically. Vague comments that have no though, will have no grade!
**Don’t take comments personally! Everyone has different tastes and no artist has ever made anything that everyone likes!! It is okay to be different- I ENCOURAGE IT!
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7 comments:
You nailed it. She is one of my favorite actresses. This is my favorite. I really like the red lips.
THis looks just like her its really cool ! nice job !
Wow! you took a big risk! this is way better than the idea of drawing her in that dress! good job! i like it! :)
You are just getting better and better.....YOU need to keep up the good work......I love that her lips are the only color of this picture...it really makes me look at her face and her expression of her face....good work ...I love it
this turned out really good! i love her hair at the top of the head and yes, you can tell that that is her collar bone and shoulder :)
You really did an amazing job! Gretchen is right you can definitely tell that it is her collar bone and her shoulder
Wow, you did it!! Realistic portraits are one of the most difficult subjects to do. Especially when it is someone famous. The difficulty is that though it may be a quality work, you will always be judged by "if it looks like the person". She may be one of the most recognizable people ever, so to make her look like herself is a huge feat. You chose a detailed, complicated, high contrast composition, and pulled it off using only some proportion mapping tricks, you should be very proud! This was a huge accomplishment for you- way to go girl!! Keep it up!!! I look forward to seeing what else you can do when you put your mind to it!!
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