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HS art students will post their new work at the end of each project (every 2-3 weeks) to get feedback from their peers and the public.
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REMEMBER:
**Be as positive as possible. Try to think about how you would feel if what you want to say was said of you. If it can possibly be taken badly, even if that is not your intent- rethink it!
**Be specific and constructive. Do not just say “It is cool.” or “ I like it.” Say what is good about it specifically. Vague comments that have no though, will have no grade!
**Don’t take comments personally! Everyone has different tastes and no artist has ever made anything that everyone likes!! It is okay to be different- I ENCOURAGE IT!
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5 comments:
i love the detail in this. i also love how to the point it is and im glad that you chose to use pen. It makes it stand out more and gives it an edgier look....oh and its to the point of in your face truth. EPIC AWESOMENESS!! :]
you ROCK !!! :D this totally shows your style and personality. i love all the different pictures too.
This is sooooooo cool! I love all the symbolism, how you consider your message, and everything seems to have a purpose. I think the ink was a good idea. The sketch quality reminds me of something I have seen on an album cover, or even something from a political cartoon. Your style is emerging here. I think this type of visual storytelling/commentary is your niche!! DO more!
ps. I still think you should consider adding a contrasting element to further focus the inside/outside effect. Just something subtle like gray, brown, or reddish tinted wash in the background- like a little watercolor. Darkening the "outside" could further add to your symbolism also...?
I would really like to see this in full size. It has so many things going on. The ones I can make out make a statement. The guy in the right corner looks like Jay Leno. :-)
I thought this was awesome!. Like that you have all the stuff going on in the background. The mix of cartoon and real life stuff really goes well. Oh yeah and butt chin bob looks awesome!
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