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**Be as positive as possible. Try to think about how you would feel if what you want to say was said of you. If it can possibly be taken badly, even if that is not your intent- rethink it!
**Be specific and constructive. Do not just say “It is cool.” or “ I like it.” Say what is good about it specifically. Vague comments that have no though, will have no grade!
**Don’t take comments personally! Everyone has different tastes and no artist has ever made anything that everyone likes!! It is okay to be different- I ENCOURAGE IT!
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12 comments:
i love this picture! the flowers all look so awesome. i think though that some of them you could have added a little bit of color to just to kind of make them pop a little bit more.. but other than that awesome job!
I love it :)
I really like how it all flows together and you can tell that you didn't trace it :) it would be awesome in color :)
good work (:
I love all the random flowers just going every where...its like they are looking for some place to go but its to tight in the flower bed....keep up the good work ...it beautiful with the swirls
i like the how each flower is different
i love this! the detail is awesome and i love how it all flows together.
this is awesome :) amazing shading! this is my inspiration for my print if we do one :)
Wow! This is great. You really took the time to incorporate the detail in this picture. I looks great. It ties together.
Keep up the good work.
Well, a lot of feedback... color could be cool if very simple and controlled, but I think you wanted the focus to be purely design, and the high contrast black and white does that perfectly. If even only one color was added in a few areas, it would pull your eye from the design details. This style comes so easy for you, you should think of more uses for it. Like mentioned above, this would fit great as a print! Maybe on marbles parchment...?
Great work, I really like the originality of the different designs. Another work I would like to see in person.
Miranda - I love it! Come see it hanging in my office :)
I enjoyed this design. I like the flow of everything. I could see this on a greeting card or on stationary.
This looks like some fabric I bought this summer. I love it.
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