HS art students will post their new work at the end of each project (every 2-3 weeks) to get feedback from their peers and the public.
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This semester students may choose which order they complete the required projects: ceramics, block printing, silk screening, sculpture, performance art, and a project of their choice. If you are interested in seeing the project requirements for each media, please see the rubrics posted on our ClassJump http://classjump.com/newellfondaart/index.php
Tuesday, December 15, 2009
T.H. Sophomore Art 2 Splatter Collage 20x29 I used pictures, paint, oil pastels, & matted board
I like the idea, the size, the color choices... I even like the quotes. Unfortunately, I think you took a lot of time on everything except the words which are the focal point! You used a bright color, in the center of your piece and you rushed it! TAKE YOU TIME ALL THE WAY THROUGH! Every detail is important to the quality of the piece as a whole!
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I like the idea, the size, the color choices... I even like the quotes. Unfortunately, I think you took a lot of time on everything except the words which are the focal point! You used a bright color, in the center of your piece and you rushed it! TAKE YOU TIME ALL THE WAY THROUGH! Every detail is important to the quality of the piece as a whole!
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